it was very good

Awesome story I love it. I'm a zombie fan always watching zombie movies and shows so when I found this I was really excited. I wasn't disappointed. I really don't like Brenda I think you should just make Todd the main character and kill Kevin off too. Anyway can't wait for the update :3

This story is beautiful (minus the gore)
I love Todd. He. Is. Awesome.

I find this a really interesting read. Interesting in the sense of the scenario that they are in. And sad that Todd feels lonely. NO one should ever feel lonely.

Thank you for sharing this.

Fires don't start spontaneously, so I suspect that it was intentional? Or did someone leave the stove on? Either way, it was a good and interesting chapter, keep it up!

very nice. I instantly knew todd was going back for mark

Nice, Todd's reaction kind of surprised me and I'm still curious about what his brother said to him at home. It doesn't matter too much if it's short IMO. Update soon!

Oh my goodness. I love this story so much...Didn't really like Heather but still...awe. Keep it up 3

Nice chapter, it's been a while. I actually liked thus chapter more than the other ones. I think maybe ou could've added the part when they obtain the weapons, since that it a big part in the story, and I'm curious to know how they can all shoot accurately; training? Anyway, good chapter, update soon!

This is well written and parts of this had made me think. Really think. I like the "I love you" part in this. Thank you for sharing this.

I wonder what Todd's tragic past was, and why he is behaving like that. I liked the end line, it kind of shows more of the dark side in that.
Good chapter, update soon.

I really love this story and it's only chapter two! Great job. Todd is also my favorite character! I feel bad for Ron, poor guy. First week living in a town and the Zombie Apocolypse begins. I look forward to your next update, no matter how long it takes, I'll just know that the longer you spend on it, the more i'll probably love it!

Really liking it so far! Todd is so shy and depressing :( I feel bad for him and can't wait to find out what's going to become of this odd group of friends. Great descriptions of characters by the way. Nicely written, keep up the good work, even though it takes a while, it's certainly worth it!

I like the first half of the chapter, it has a lot of characterisation in it and I could picture how everyone looked in my mind. I also liked the quick backstory you put in, it makes it more believable.
However, I feel that you could have made the second half flow more slowly. I think you could've split it into two chapters, them entering the cemetry being the second chapter. I just feel that it went too fast, you could've explained how everyone was panicked, how the smell was sickening etc...
But still, you caught my attention with the chapter, I'm looking forward to more.

OMG! I like how you took your time to start the story and it wasn't just all of the sudden "omg zombies are eating my brains!" lol. I can't wait to read the next chap! :)