LOVE the ending, very deep and sophisticated.
Great poem! You expressed the longing for love extremly well and connected to the reader with ease. One thing though, I believe in the first line, "I wish that the sons" is suppossed to read, "I wish that the songs"
Keep Writing!

I loved it, I think you have a lot of potential, keep up the good work (:

That was beautiful. You have beautiful prose and I love the way your stanza's flowed into one another. The last two lines were especially beautiful "than more means to me." is just so subtly beautiful and meaningful.
I really enjoyed that. Great work! :)