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   AppleCrumble 7/28/12 . chapter 1Amazing, loved it :-D I really liked the "Don't watch for me, Don't wait for me. Don't look back. Don't look back…" It created a great effect and added to the overall imagery. Great job :-D |
| JellicleJuggalo 7/21/12 . chapter 1 Another awesome poem, that flows between very literal descriptions, and symbolic, cryptic imagery. Captures a strong sense of abandonment, with minimal hints as to the specific incident, while giving as detailed a picture as possible. Great job! |
| a dreamer's suicide 7/15/12 . chapter 1 Wonderful, Everything From The Title To The Last Line In Particular I Love. x |
| The Moon Howls At The Wolf 7/7/12 . chapter 1 Wow... intense immgery and emotion. I love the contrast between what I percieve as science fiction illusions and human nature, very telling. Great job playing with emjambment, although I don't necessarily feel the need to bold the line, "in your glorified wake." Once again, strong ending line! Keep Writing! |
