Cool chapter! You write his emotions very well with his curiosity and confusion. Well done, well done lol can't wait to read more!
hey at the end did you purposly use "bUnny" and not "bOnny"?...just askin
from your bestie threelove
SOUL CITY FTW xoxo

Hey it's me threelove! I'm not logd in right now cuz I'm to lazy to and I completely forgot my email address cuz I havent been on this site in so long xD I haven't continued Brave Spear INNA LOOOOOONG time. I gotta do that O.O...anywhoo 'Nuf about me. This story is really cool its very different and intresting and i like it already! I literally gasped and said *in high pitched voice* CLIFFHANGEEERRRRR at the end lol I can't wait to read more! You know me I hate to be kept waiting so HURRYY and write more please lol...also I like how you explain things very well I do t really understand this stuff and I'd be like huh? If someone tried to explain it to me haha so thank you for that lol...KAY BYE

Haha this story got a nice beginning
And you tell what this guy is like just by him telling use about the story haha
He seem like a real bad ass :D
I can't wait until the next chapter
This story is awesome :3

Hehe i freakin love this guy! funny, yet strange, yet psychotic, yet slightly ADD-but in an absolutly awesome way lol lovin the writin style. I also have started to write like this, where you can tell someone's personality by the way they talk. And I don't think there'll be a soul out there that doesn't somewhat already know your character after readin this chap.
So seriously great job, and get to writtin lol