|Reviews for goodbye, slumber doll|
| The Moon Howls At The Wolf 10/10/12 . chapter 1
Wow! I love the immagery here! Its very easy to imagine a china doll sitting on a shelf versus a person running around outside, exeriencing life. I see a rhyme here, not a whole scheme between "closed shut" and "for what?" although an argunt can be made for "back then" and "eyes wide open"
| BlameMyMuses 9/5/12 . chapter 1
Ooh, I love convoluted rhyme schemes!
Very nicely done. I loved the imagery of the china doll, waiting for something to happen and the idea of being awaken. Or, at least, that's what I got.
| Nabo Preo 8/21/12 . chapter 1
That was nice!
| Spring Storm 7/5/12 . chapter 1
The rhyme scheme is really cool. I like how you slant-rhymed "then" and "open" - really clever. I also like the poem itself. The idea of dreaming with eyes open is really interesting. Good job!