I can't help but think Simon is a bit of a stalker, but I can tell he really cares for Misa. Overall love it and keep writing more xD I want to read moreeee!

Ahhh, I LOVE this story! You write so, so well and the plot is absolutely addicting. Hope you update soon!

Well, Simon is definitely a creeper, but a cute one. I like Winnie, she has some good attitude and I think every good fictional piece needs some attitude (and if it comes in fishnet tights and lucite heels, even better). Misa seems to be a contradiction - she doesn't hesitate in her interactions and she appears to stand up for herself in most situations, but she has this reserved, almost shy side to her. I'm guessing it has to do with her discomfort around men who have a romantic interest in her, due to some past incident with that crazy dude she had a restraining order against. Still, who wouldn't want to have someone like Simon around, who seems like kind of a basket case and has decided to move into your hospital with you to take care of you? Totally not awkward at all!

I'm really loving this story so far. I hope you are planning on making it a longer fic so I have more of it to read!