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  MikSD 10/21/12 . chapter 26 I got really into this story and I thought it was very well written. Even though there were some parts that were rather slow, I thought that most of the story was very entertaining |
 Searchingformyheart 10/20/12 . chapter 26Gaahhhh I was so mad when this chapter ended :P great update! At first I was scared Tim was like turning them in or something...and then I was like HAHA I WAS RIGHT I KNEW FELT WAS MAGICAL |
| Shadowedzone 10/20/12 . chapter 26 Love the new chapter. It wasn't what I was expecting (that's a good thing, believe me), and I like what you did with the magic. |
| Searchingformyheart 10/12/12 . chapter 25 Aww...keep going! The story's got me hooked, and I really want to know what the dragon was talking about :O |
| Searchingformyheart 10/12/12 . chapter 15 LOL I loved this chapter. Especially the part where Felt and Thea were arguing.. xD Keep writing! |
| Shadowedzone 10/12/12 . chapter 25 Awesome, as always. And you were on time finally! Hurray! Can't wait till next Friday. |
| Shadowedzone 10/7/12 . chapter 24 Okay, I'll review(but you have to keep your promise!). Oh, and you don't have to respond to my reviews, but I might like it if you do. |
| Swallow-tailed Kite 10/3/12 . chapter 23 This chapter's AN ruins the dramatic effect :P ["I told you my temper was short, princess," she growled, and opened her mouth wide.] In dialogues like these, where the speaker doesn't speak anymore after the dialogue (or at least in the same paragraph) end the dialogue sentences with a '.' full stop instead of a comma {"I told you my temper was short, princess." she growled, and opened her mouth wide.} |
| Shadowedzone 10/1/12 . chapter 23 Well, I think it's awesome. That's all I'm thinking. Well, I'm also thinking about how to write what I'm thinking about, but that's besides the point. Keep up the good work! |
| Shadowedzone 9/22/12 . chapter 22 Thanks for the chapter. P.S. It was as awesome as a BBQ-ed spider! |
| Shadowedzone 9/14/12 . chapter 21 I'll stay. And I think it's great, the only problem I have is the waiting, but it's definitely worth it. |
| Reader 9/13/12 . chapter 20 Keep writing, I want to see the ending. This is an awesome story, though how can a person's eyes look like a feather? I think that it sounds like a story for little kids, but it is still a good story. |
| Shadowedzone 9/12/12 . chapter 20 Your book is sweet, and I'll review any other books you make(If I like them). |
| Calliope 9/7/12 . chapter 20 You know, during that fight, I had no idea who o root for, because I can't decide if I like Felt or Argon better...it's a tough decision. Anyway, your chapter was great! Time to wait a week. |
| Calliope 9/1/12 . chapter 19 I enjoy reading your story, and just like you, I find the Mayo intriguing and extremely creepy. Can't wait to see where it goes next week! |
