|Reviews for Zero Hour|
| SagittarianArcher 1/19/13 . chapter 14
Yay, a shout out! :D I love how much cooler and badder Jinx is in this version of Zero Hour and Ally's sneezing is really cute!
| Orion Ehra 1/16/13 . chapter 14
| Trinity the Craz 1/15/13 . chapter 1
:( It didn't let me type my whole name... But i think you guys know what I was going to say XD Anyway! Good job!
| SagittarianArcher 12/18/12 . chapter 10
Lol Ally is so random! :D
| SagittarianArcher 12/10/12 . chapter 9
Poor Seb, he takes so much crap that he doesn't deserve :( Why do the football team pick on him anyway?
| anneka 12/4/12 . chapter 8
hi there, guys! I love the re-story so far! have to say I'm especially enjoying the fast updates :P
anyway, this chapter was fab. LOVE the description of Jinx (om nom nom) and am shipping Minx aaall over again, more hardcore than ever.
poor little Seb :( always so alone :((( HE NEEDS FRIENDS GUYS give Seb friends
I know he has friends but he needs friends who CARE
I always love the descriptions of Ally's family :) and BLONDE? what could this plot twist be? :P
poor Toby. don't worry about talking to Lyra, she'll probably just hug you. and then punch you. and then you two can make out. mmkay.
SCARLETT'S IN ON THE PLOT WITH THE TEST SUBJECTS? HOW MYSTERIOUS!
dun dun duuuunnnnnnn
yay excited for more chapters! keep updating guys, you're the best :D
oh, and my favourite lines from the chapter:
'Shut up ET, no one else seems to have a problem with it in the college dorms,' Carter said strolling out of his room wearing jeans, a t-shirt and ducky slippers, 'Heck, I've shown up to class in a bee costume and no one even blinked.'
'What? Do I have horns?' she asked like it was a genuine possibility, 'A tail? Wings? Aw! I want wings!'
He was going to have to go talk to Lyra.
| SagittarianArcher 12/3/12 . chapter 8
God, Scarlett's like every kid's nightmare come true!
| Guest 12/2/12 . chapter 7
Hi it's greenbamboo. I've read through the chapters and I find I like the previous story better. It was a bit more slow paced on the action side, but you could really feel the characters more. I feel perhaps the story is going a bit too fast atm.
ps. sorry for late reviews! Been working 12 hours 4 days a week! _
| SagittarianArcher 11/30/12 . chapter 7
Lol, if I was floating, I'd have cheered or wonder if someone slipped something in my food XD
| mandelbrot2 11/29/12 . chapter 6
Just as good as the old one if not better thank you for finally updating.
| SagittarianArcher 11/21/12 . chapter 6
I absolutely love Lyra, she's my favourite! :)
| mandelbrot2 10/27/12 . chapter 1
please update my favorite story i have read it several times over
| mandlebrot2 10/19/12 . chapter 1
pleas write more this is my favorite fiction press story
| Hungergamezluver 10/17/12 . chapter 22
Just going to say 3 simple words
UPDATE OR ELSE!
| Hungergamezluver 8/7/12 . chapter 22
Curse you 2 having a social life and not being able to update please update soon
-hunger gamez luver