|Reviews for Zero Hour|
| shimmeringbubbles 7/30/12 . chapter 17
You're walking behind me right now. Now you're sitting down. Opening your laptop.
Sh, I swear I'm not a stalker.
| shimmeringbubbles 7/30/12 . chapter 16
When Ally and Orion get married and have cute babies I would like to put dibs on naming one of them Anneka.
It's getting exciting! :P
| shimmeringbubbles 7/30/12 . chapter 15
CAN ALLY AND ORION JUST GET MARRIED ALREADY?
That is all.
| shimmeringbubbles 7/30/12 . chapter 14
Aaaand the plot thickens...
Alion? Ory? (oh, damn, 'Orally' just popped into my head... please tell me you didn't base their names on that or I might have to kill myself. Or you.)
I think I'll go with Alion.
| shimmeringbubbles 7/30/12 . chapter 13
Trololol I just worked out I can log in with my fanfiction account. This is Anneka, but don't tell anybody.
I enjoyed this chapter way too much. Now I'm busy figuring out a ship name for Ally/Orion. I'll get back to you.
| Anneka 7/30/12 . chapter 8
Hello there :)
I was going to review this with my account but then I realised I don't have a FictionPress account. Oops.
Anyway; I love the story. Really original and interesting plotline; it takes a while to set up the story but you have so many characters to develop so it works. I'm going to keep reading now okay.
R*****/Ally (am I allowed to do that?), my lovely, if you don't tell me what fuzzy means I will not be held responsible for any grievous bodily harm that you may incur over the next 24 hours. ;D
| Hungergamezluver 7/29/12 . chapter 1
Hey it's me hunger gamez luver on your other fanfiction you said to look at this and I did it's really good and intresting but still keep writing the forbidden year fanfiction cause that's wonderful
Keep writing from your fellow fan
Hunger gamez luver
| GreenBamboo 7/27/12 . chapter 21
I was wondering who was Jinx since chapter 1! :D and now I know.
I loved the part Ally froze her own mouth shut. Can't wait to see what Lyra's planned for Halloween! Oh and can't wait to see what they'll all dress as!
| GreenBamboo 7/25/12 . chapter 20
Lol, it honestly is less impressive when you know how the tricks are done :)
Nice of Lyra to send the pics to her dad. Rose is more a thorn than a rose .
Thanks for the new chapter! :)
| GreenBamboo 7/21/12 . chapter 19
Lol nyancat argument. I'm guessing Ally is good at creative writing.
Poor Toby, but honestly much better this way around. Don't worry Toby, its just like pulling a bandage off, the pain goes away fast.
I can't wait to see what they wear for hallow's eve.. Wolverine ftw! Maybe ally shud come as another xman, er woman ;)
| GreenBamboo 7/21/12 . chapter 18
Thanks for the new chappy! :D Plz take ur time in updating ;) a little wait before good things always make it better!
Seems Ally is more an 'icy bear' than a honey one! Great, she has a weather (elemental?) Power! I likey!
Seb's part made me sad though... And brr... Winter without gas... I can relate to that, u feel like hibernating and get sick til u don't wanna eat and lose weight. Poor Sebby :'(
| Hufflepuff 7/21/12 . chapter 18
Awesome chapter! Love Ally's power can't wait for the next chapter the story is really amazing so far!
| Hufflepuff 7/20/12 . chapter 17
Epic chapter can't wait for the rest of the twists
| GreenBamboo 7/19/12 . chapter 17
Yay another chappy! I'm afraid I got spoiled by waking up to a new one and felt :'( last two days ;)
Hmm, Lyra's powers are pretty wicked, in both senses. With her emotions and temper, I can see it going sour. I wonder what she'd see if she took hold of everyone's palm. Lol that would make them lay off though, wouldn't it?
I do wonder what she saw when she punched Toby, seemed like something that caught her off guard and scared her.
| Guest 7/17/12 . chapter 1