Hey Ally.

You're walking behind me right now. Now you're sitting down. Opening your laptop.

Sh, I swear I'm not a stalker.

When Ally and Orion get married and have cute babies I would like to put dibs on naming one of them Anneka.

It's getting exciting! :P

CAN ALLY AND ORION JUST GET MARRIED ALREADY?

That is all.

Aaaand the plot thickens...

Loving it.

Alion? Ory? (oh, damn, 'Orally' just popped into my head... please tell me you didn't base their names on that or I might have to kill myself. Or you.)
I think I'll go with Alion.

Trololol I just worked out I can log in with my fanfiction account. This is Anneka, but don't tell anybody.

I enjoyed this chapter way too much. Now I'm busy figuring out a ship name for Ally/Orion. I'll get back to you.

Hello there :)
I was going to review this with my account but then I realised I don't have a FictionPress account. Oops.

Anyway; I love the story. Really original and interesting plotline; it takes a while to set up the story but you have so many characters to develop so it works. I'm going to keep reading now okay.

R*****/Ally (am I allowed to do that?), my lovely, if you don't tell me what fuzzy means I will not be held responsible for any grievous bodily harm that you may incur over the next 24 hours. ;D

Hey it's me hunger gamez luver on your other fanfiction you said to look at this and I did it's really good and intresting but still keep writing the forbidden year fanfiction cause that's wonderful
Keep writing from your fellow fan
Hunger gamez luver

I was wondering who was Jinx since chapter 1! :D and now I know.

I loved the part Ally froze her own mouth shut. Can't wait to see what Lyra's planned for Halloween! Oh and can't wait to see what they'll all dress as!

Lol, it honestly is less impressive when you know how the tricks are done :)

Nice of Lyra to send the pics to her dad. Rose is more a thorn than a rose .

Thanks for the new chapter! :)

Lol nyancat argument. I'm guessing Ally is good at creative writing.

Poor Toby, but honestly much better this way around. Don't worry Toby, its just like pulling a bandage off, the pain goes away fast.

I can't wait to see what they wear for hallow's eve.. Wolverine ftw! Maybe ally shud come as another xman, er woman ;)

Thanks for the new chappy! :D Plz take ur time in updating ;) a little wait before good things always make it better!

Seems Ally is more an 'icy bear' than a honey one! Great, she has a weather (elemental?) Power! I likey!

Seb's part made me sad though... And brr... Winter without gas... I can relate to that, u feel like hibernating and get sick til u don't wanna eat and lose weight. Poor Sebby :'(

Awesome chapter! Love Ally's power can't wait for the next chapter the story is really amazing so far!

Epic chapter can't wait for the rest of the twists

Yay another chappy! I'm afraid I got spoiled by waking up to a new one and felt :'( last two days ;)

Hmm, Lyra's powers are pretty wicked, in both senses. With her emotions and temper, I can see it going sour. I wonder what she'd see if she took hold of everyone's palm. Lol that would make them lay off though, wouldn't it?

I do wonder what she saw when she punched Toby, seemed like something that caught her off guard and scared her.

cool pomelo