|Reviews for The Awakening|
| confused 4/13/13 . chapter 2
How come at the end of The Game Jenna wakes up but in The Awakening its in Leah's POV and we don't get to know what happens?
| Jam 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Can i kill leah? Pleeeeeeaaaaaase? Althou i hav a bff whos in the same situation, except for the gf being brain dead part. But srsly, im getting annoyed with her and its still the first chappie. Youll forgive me if i stop reading, wont you.? Doubt you would, but just really want to prove a point. I want to kill leah.
| lilac-snowflakes 8/10/12 . chapter 1
Eeeeek! I really, really, really, really cannot wait to read the rest of this book! Please update soon
| Luvkiwi13 7/19/12 . chapter 2
| LessThan34Ever 7/17/12 . chapter 2
Heya! And NO it does not make up for Leah. I don't like Leah. She is the bane of my existance. I read The Game while it was still up on FctionPress, but I was just one of those anonymous readers that didn't review because I didn't feel like making an account and other things.
Anyways, so on the summary you put up for the game, it says Jenna wakes up on Leah and Jason's 8th month anniversary or somthing along those lines. Yeah, I'm waiting for that part so Jason can go running back to Jenna and I can be like HA IN YOUR FACE SUCKER! And Leah can go disappear and be with like Sam or someone else. I hope you have full intentions on getting Jason and Jenna back together or I won't be responsible for my actions.
Oh yeah, question! Would Liam, by any chance, be making an appearance in this story? He was my favorite character! We both share a passion for lemonade!
| Guest 7/17/12 . chapter 2
Please update soon! I can't wait for Leah to find out about what happened to Jenna!
| Aphrodithe 7/15/12 . chapter 1
UGh! I hate leah! I love Jenna Go away stupid Leah OH! Btw chlobuggy, my friend, inhale-love, told me you were plagiarized by nikkakitty? something like that. Inhale-love also got plagiarized by the same person. AWESOME STORY BTW.
He almost looked pained but agreed to do it. "Maybe you should wear more when you leave the dorms late at night then, just to be on the safe side."
"Thanks for walking me back," I said. "I know you didn't want to."
"It's not a problem, really. I'm just worn out. It's been a long day."
"Tell me about it! I didn't realize how much stuff I have until I was moving it up four stories! And then we were out until the pizza parlor closed! Your friends are really awesome, by the way. Except for Sam, he's super quiet."
He smiled. "That's just Sam. One on one the guy is really great, but in big crowds he feels uncomfortable."
"I can relate to that."
"You seem pretty confident."
"It's all an act. I'm not that confident."
He looked at me sideways. "An act? How do you act like your confident?"
"Well I'm not timid. I'm just not as confident as I let on. But if you ever tell anyone that, I'll kill you!" I was just blurting it all out. Jason didn't need, and probably didn't want, to hear about all of my insecurities. "I didn't mean to tell you that." I looked up at him sheepishly, trying to gauge his reaction.
He smiled. "Okay. It's forgotten."
I couldn't help but notice the distance between the two of us. He was walking as far away from me as he could and his hands were shoved in his pockets. He was pretty much keeping his face pointed towards the ground and the slower I was trying to walk, trying to prolong our exchange, the faster he seemed to be trying to go. "Jason," I said. He didn't answer, just seemed lost in thought. "Jason," I tried again.
I put my arm on his and he wrenched it away.
"Jason!" I said, a little bit louder.
"Sorry," he muttered.
"Look, I'll walk to rest of the way to the dorms, it's fine. I didn't realize how much you didn't want to walk me here. So thank you, but goodbye." I left him standing there and walked as fast as I could back upstairs, totally embarrassed.
He probably thought I was a total ditz. I guess he would be right. After all, I did call him, start questioning him about his life and then basically obligated him into walking me back to the dorms. Of course, I didn't really think it was that big of a deal, it obviously was, though.
I crawled into bed and flung my jacket onto the desk. I was stupid. Jason's girlfriend, Jenna, is some lucky girl. I picked up my phone and did everything I could to find Jason on facebook. Turns out, his name was Jason Anderson and he had been in a relationship with Jenna Bouanchoud since September of 2007. I tapped on her name and went through her facebook pictures. She was beautiful in a cute, hometown kind of way. She had long dark hair and soft features. I was instantly jealous. She had been in a happy relationship for five years. Five years.
I WAS LIKE IN YOUR FACE GIRL! JASON IS WITH JENNA! I TOTES LOVE YOUR STORY. KEEP IT UP. YOU HAVE BEEN IN MY FAV AUTHOR LIST UP UNTIL NOW! HAHAHAHAHAHA WALANG HIYA KA LEAH (OOPS I JUST SPOKE A DIFFERENT LANGUAGE HAHAHA) i LOVE JENNA
| musicalfishieXD 7/14/12 . chapter 2
Lemonade! Sweet tea is just too much. I like leah, it just seems troublesome.
| DarkAngel1130 7/13/12 . chapter 2
She has to the point that I feel bad for her losing her sister but the accidental snarky remarks she makes to Jason about him and his gf just really throw me off. I think the one who has redeemed himself most is Sam because I really didn't know what to think about him at first. Now I think he's a great guy.
Answer: Both. XD
| JJsMommy29 7/13/12 . chapter 2
great chapter just not sure how i feel about Leah right now but can't wait to see what happens next
| artandtheories 7/11/12 . chapter 1
Wow. What's wrong with her? Mean much.
Anyway, I thought this would be in Jason's perspective?
| akhernandez2 7/10/12 . chapter 1
I saw this and decided to read the game and loved it! I'm sad I have to wait for the chapters to get posted... Hopefully they come fast!
| Guest 7/8/12 . chapter 1
So I read this chapter then went and read the game and loved it, not sure I am going to be able to wait for the whole story to be posted!
| fallingstar2108 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Great job with this chapter! Keep up the awesome work and please update soon!
| jasrub24 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Cool beans bro. I like it but i dont like Leah. I DONT WANNA GIVE HER TIME! :P