|Reviews for Broken Girl|
| Aestas-zephyrus 11/21/12 . chapter 1
WHy does this plot sounds so much like The Faith in our stars...
| Saving grace 11/18/12 . chapter 1
This was beautifully written and I loved it so much.
| Guest 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Oh! I am crying now. this was beautiful. Well written and such a loveable story. :) And baily at the end...so cute...
| I'm an Aussie to 10/9/12 . chapter 1
This is really sad but I love it too much to say anything bad about it. There were maybe like two spelling errors or something but even so I thought it was excellent.
Great work. I want more stories like this from you.
| Beauty within 10/2/12 . chapter 1
This was so sad. I have knots in my throat already. You wrote a beautiful piece and although it came to an sad ending, it was still light and happy throughout the start. I adore bailey and how nice he is to his sister. Reminds me of my little brother which I am about to go hug. I loved this a lot. Watch a few grammatical errors but this was amazing with or without them
Great work !
- Mia -
| whatdotheydream 9/30/12 . chapter 1
Dear God. I am crying. I know a little girl with lukemia.
| SpiderFingers 9/30/12 . chapter 2
Oh. My. Gosh. That was incredible.
You really made me cry, and that's saying something; I don't usually cry easily from books or stories, but this really touched my heart. You are an amazing writer, keep up the good work!
| janae 9/29/12 . chapter 1
great, now i won't ever be able to listen to that song ever again without crying! this story was amazing captured my attention from the beginning and made me sob at the end. good job.
| Starsis 9/29/12 . chapter 2
This was awesome, the ending was so sad! :( I'm really glad you wrote it, you're an amazing writer! :D When ever I hear that song, I start to cry :)... So nice job! :D
| xoxoxoxoxo 9/19/12 . chapter 1
I can't help it. Every time I hear them talk i smile. Ellie has a dark past and can't shake that. She's sad and depressed. Given up hope. And then she meets Noah and everything changes for her. Suddenly she happy, and smiling and full of laughter. I loved this story a lot. Great work and make sure you keep writing. I think this story is one of the best ONE-SHOTS on FP
| I AM A NINJA 9/19/12 . chapter 1
i really loved this, i did. It was very well written and made me cry, a lot actually. Well done. Now, if you excuse me, i need to go wash my face and the makeup that my tears have smudged. LOL.
| MagicWords 9/2/12 . chapter 1
This was so sad, but Noah was so completely sweet! I loved it. So sad, it made me want to sob and sob. Great job on this piece. You pulled off a very successful tragic love tale.
| HollyMarie 9/1/12 . chapter 1
This was very sweet and detailed and yes i did cry. I think you did a brilliant job at keeping the emotions pure. Well done. My Fav One-shot on FP
| Writing In Ink Forever 8/31/12 . chapter 1
Aww. This story was so cute. I almost cried, and probably would have if I wasn't in class.
You're an exquisite author, you really are. The detail was amazing. This has been one of the greatest oneshots that I have ever read. Keep writing!
| AnonymousGirlWriter 8/20/12 . chapter 1
Awww, I was crying at the end! It was really good!