Oh my god! That was so sad, I started crying. Very good!

This was a very entertaining story and although i did not cry i felt very sad afterwards because it was so emotional. The brother was very cute in taking care of Ellie and i think you did a great job. There are a few grammatical errors i wont bother going through and i think Bailey was very mature for a little kid. Still it was very well done.

Thank you for sharing this.

Nina xx

I cant believe i am actually crying right now. Bailey is just too adorable. This was a remarkable story which i will tell my friends to check out. XD

Okay this was a lovely chapter. So sweet. I will read the last chapter now.

I thought this was actually quite funny despite such dim surroundings. I am entertained. Great work.

Okay...first let me say...WOW
This was beautiful and sad and i am crying while i type this. I love this story. Well done. Well done indeed.

Awwwwww this was really nice. Great work.

This is really good. I will definetly move to the next chapter! I love your stories. You desribe things with such pretty imagery. Well Done.