|Reviews for Home?|
| jurjid 7/26/12 . chapter 1
Good story. I don't understand why she would dream she was any animal though (and I don't know which animal)
| Visionary Theory 7/21/12 . chapter 1
I enjoy this story quite a bit, would you mind if I where to narrate it in a youtube video?
| Charlie Phelps 7/8/12 . chapter 1
I found this story very compelling. You used great sentence structure, and it flowed quite naturally. I also loved your use of metaphors. Keep it up. 5/5