I had a feeling it was the rival country and I love how she was the attention of every new face in the room! I wish you didn't have to leave it as a cliff hanger buuuut I guess until a story is done the end of every chapter is a cliffy aren't they? I can't wait for more! :)

It was good! I am writing a story with simmilar but different concepts and I couldnt resist reading this. Keep up the good work :)

I like it so far so good! :)