|Reviews for Helpless|
| Eleantris 7/31/12 . chapter 1
I loved this! So dark and spooky, with excellent vocab. Great work! :D
| Emptiness-Is-All-You-Know 7/27/12 . chapter 1
Love this one! Great description and vivid imagery :D
| Ivy Climbroe 7/24/12 . chapter 1
I love how you write! You think of the simplest things and put them into words, like a real nightmare. Great piece :)
| Mylilblackpen 7/14/12 . chapter 1
Again reminds me of Hunger Games (doesn't help that I finished reading the last book last night) but I just couldn't help imagining Katniss trapped in that room while they tried her for shooting Coin. Loved the imagery, very vivid! Great pace and before I could catch up with it, the end was nigh! Love, love, loved it! :-D
| Meadow Frost 7/9/12 . chapter 1
Wow, that was intense. *sigh* Why are you so amazing? I always look for something that might need fixing, but I never do. And it's always so beautiful in my head.
| TheGlycoprotein 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery, as always my friend. Very dramatic and really gets the mind in a spin. You've captured the situation of a nightmare really well. Epic! :)
| Valenteen 7/7/12 . chapter 1
Brilliant as ever- your writing is amazing. This truly personifies the night- I love it.