way to go emeary! XD

You know the most amazing thing about this story is that I never know what to expect.

You are so good at what you do. You are a damn good writer. Really, you have me waiting for something to happen only to make something else happen, and that something else is even better than what I expected.

One minute they were in the middle of a chaos, the next the three of them are walking through a labyrinth and the next Emeary is finding her way to Michael.

You really keep your readers intrigued till the very last.

I hope to get a sooner update! You're amazing.

I have a question. Have you already decided how you're going to end The Midnight Moon?

Good day! :)

You. Are. Brilliant! And you have caught my liking for cliffies, eh? Update soon!

By the way, that long-winded guest review article below is from me :p

emeary...good luck...XD

Oh. my. gosh.

I can't even type I'm shaking from EXCITEMENT!

This was your best chapter yet, hands down! The writing was perfect. I especially loved the line: At once, they knew that all the rumors were pale, flimsy things compared to reality.

Man, from Daniel's death threats to Michael to Aaron's surprise appearance (I was taken off guard but shrieked in joy!) to the eerie labyrinth...oh man.

Loved that Em wandered off, but my favorite part was the brief middle in Dan's p.o.v. He realized his mistake and called out Aaron's name...gah! Epic! I have a story not on fp that has a lost maze scene, too. It really brings excitement into stories. Loved yours truly!

Oh Virtus! He sounds like the essence of pure evil! Have I mentioned that you have amazing talent and such a unique, enthralling story? Please please try to publish when you're done. I've probably already told you, but I will buy a copy! Haha!

Please don't keep me waiting long! I'm on the edge of my seat dying to know what happens next!

aw damn, i thought maybe michael would get a fast death with as little pain as possible, but now i'm pretty sure he's gonna be shot at least 20 times before he's allowed to die. hey, better than being tortured! XD

I really like the way you write.

You have done an amazing job from the description of Acraluna down to the very minute emotions stirring inside Daniel and Emeary.

You're great!

As usual, loved it! Please update soon! :)

Did i mention you're awesome? :)))))

This was great! You paint such a lovely picture of Acraluna. I could totally visualize the entire scene with ease!

Oh, I know Daniel in rage! This next chapter is going to be good. I wonder how they are going to stop these big guardian guys. I think its Aaron's cue to show up right...about...now! Ha!

I'm so happy you updated! It made my night, and that's saying a lot because I've had a truly awful day. Thanks for making it a little less gloomy with your wonderful update!

Keep it up!

MW

oh damn...i love daniel's sisters though, treating this like a game! XD

Ahhhh waited so long for an update! Yayay! So good! Moremoremore

*Biting nails in anticipation*

The chapter was short but that doesn't matter because you have definitely built the tension... O_O

I don't know if I'm making a wild guess or not, but are Luella and Larissa somehow being controlled by the demon, Virtus? I hope not! So much will be at stake then!

I hope nothing happens to Emeary and Daniel!

Update soon!

Virtus! You make up the best names, Irony. I need to take some lessons from you. I've missed you; how's life?

Wow, this chapter had me on the edge of my seat! AND whohoo, Aaron is back! The only part that I thought needed changing were the parenthesized words: (normal) and (Abnormal). You could say something more flowy like: Aaron was seated behind his desk once again, but for the first time in a long while, he was not pouring over countless documents of information. On this night, he was slumped over on his desk dreaming.

Just a thought.

I loved all of the p.o.v.s and am so excited to see everyone's fate. Luella and Larissa sure are interesting characters. They have such mysterious intentions!

Can't wait to see what happens next, and you better update soon! I mean it! :)