| Reviews for Born Free and Running Wild |
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monkeyface1 12/6/12 . chapter 5 oh my god! i cant believe this! I was really starting to like jason! and you left me in suspense to you know...i love this sequel! thanks and please update soon. |
Larrissa Freeman 8/30/12 . chapter 5I really enjoyed the first book. I cant wait for the next update. |
imperfectlyokay 8/29/12 . chapter 5Loving this so far! Chapter 1: a great intro chapter. Same characters but unfamiliar situations that immediately got me hooked :) I like the part about having a web of packs at her fingertips. It sounds awesome. Those humans are TOTAL bitches. Hate them in the same way as I hate Joffrey from Game of Thrones... Which if you don't watch it, you won't get it :\ point is, some people are just asking for a swift kick in the face and Devereaux is one of them. Lookig forward to chapter 6! I like how it still has elements of humour in it but it's somewhat darker than Fur Bred. I saw some general grammar/spelling mistakes while reading. I'd offer to be your beta (LOL!) if you're still looking for one but I seriously have no time :( |
shann-ng 8/29/12 . chapter 5yayyyyyyyyyyyy thanks for the chapter :), i dont really understand what wolfsbane is? and poor jason :( i hate MK arghhhhhh. i hope they get out soon, and the technician dies haha. looking forward to the next update:) |
shann-ng 8/29/12 . chapter 4omg this chapter was worth the wait, it got my heart pumping.. omg i hate that technician i dont think wren and marrok have much choice but this will break them:( this is so upsetting... i cant imagine the pain marroks in and fear for wren :O i hope this has a happy ending. thanks for the great chapter |
Dexx36 8/27/12 . chapter 5 I am so hoping after reading this that Wren and Marrok make a go of things, escape, co-alpha and get to raise their child. But that's just me. I can't wait to find out if they finally escape or not. |
Love in All Forms 8/27/12 . chapter 5Yay! My favorite chapter. No cliff hanger! |
SJ 8/27/12 . chapter 5 not gonna lie ur a scary writer bc ur soo good at what u write that when you write about dark and deadly stuff it feels real. a great trait actually. yeah i get the prego thing with humans and wolves. but im still surprised she didnt try to lie her way saying she cant get prego...even if they can tell. question...whats with the 2 helping wolves? im confused about that. and the death of jason... kinda feels like u were leading into that n then bam we were thrown in the middle of it. no clue what happened or why, or how. also i feel like there isnt much of a fight on wrens side in this. shes all tough and can take pain but she knows what will happen to her baby and yet she still goes along with it. kinda thought she would be more protective of a child bc of her past daughter. as always loved it! great chapter take care |
Sapphire2619 8/27/12 . chapter 5Gay hate and love u right now, can't wait for more |
SJ 8/27/12 . chapter 4 hey when its a good story its worth the wait. but gaaaah i have noo clue where ur going to go with this story haha its exciting and frustraiting (in a good way). so far all hope seems lost. n why doesnt she just tell them that she cant have pups that shes already lost a baby? keep on writing! take care |
Love in All Forms 8/26/12 . chapter 4I wanna know what happens :( I am on the edge now. Great Chapter |
Dexx36 8/26/12 . chapter 4 The story is definitely not disappointing. You left off with a good cliffhanger...can't wait to see what the future holds. The turn of events between Wren and Marrok have captured my attention. I can't wait to see what future chapters hold :) |
Keenon 8/24/12 . chapter 1It's been a month since you last updated! Please update soon, the suspense is killing me 0.0 |
Tammy Rae 8/18/12 . chapter 3So far, so good. Can't wait to read more. |
shann-ng 8/14/12 . chapter 3great chapterrrrr yet again, i hope marrok is okay and they ally together or something hahaha;D |