|Reviews for Living On|
| ScarletRose7865 7/8/12 . chapter 1
I enjoyed it. I found a few grammar errors, and you missed some punctuation but overall it was good. I am a bit surprised at the parents reaction. I would've expected them to be pissed, regardless of who was drunk, but they seemed pretty accepting, which is a nice change. Keep writing.
ps if you could review my story also i'd really appreciate it. thanks!