|Reviews for Wrong|
| misguided mania 7/20/12 . chapter 1
This piece made me smile cuz it was fun. Even though you express frustration in the poem it felt light hearted. Possibly because of the rhyme scheme. The rhymes flowed so well it became a song in my head while I was reading. Me likes :)
| Archia 7/9/12 . chapter 1
Oh I hate when stuff like that happens, this nicely highlighted the frustrations of it. I enjoyed the rhyme in this, there was a tone to it, that was cool actually, I'm not sure of a better word to describe it. Nice poem.