I love the fact that all three of them start the with the same words, it obviously provides a perfect link through the trilogy. I think my favourite is Conformist, just because it can be used to describe so many situations. Awesome work!

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I liked the idea here. Starting each haiku with the same phrase worked well to connect them and didn't seem repetitive which is a hard thing to do in haikus! I also liked each one individually. I think they are definitely relateable.

The only thing is I would probably make this one story with 3 chapters since they are separate pieces really.

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Very valid point. Great job :)

very lovely poem making a very nice point! Everyone really is a hypocrite. I think the term has come to mostly apply to people who believe they are above what they preach. Hipsters are the dark matter mainstream. It is a different kind of cool to find obscure things. I really like the idea of this poem, the 'I've come to admit'. Keep up the great work!

It's been said that poetry without truth isn't poetry.
You certainly proved that here. Good job.

Couldn't have been more honest if you fuckin' tried. Holy shit.

Thank you, for the slight sliver of truth you've produced. It is true, regardless of what people say, everyone is a conformist in their own right. Also, in terms of your work, I've seen no mistakes so good job!

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