This is so relatable and imagery a mimic of reality; brilliant piece - love it! :D I am at a loss at what to write about this because it is just so good it has left me penless (like speechless but for writers loss) lol

Keep writing! I love your pieces :)

The eloquence in this poem is so evident and lovely that I'm pretty sure I melted into this poem when I read it. It's truly beautiful and I've never thought of being broken in that way. It's a whole new perspective and I love it!