|Reviews for A Step Forward|
| Monette 7/22/12 . chapter 1
Hmm I think it's interesting and different. Not many romance stories start off with the main character being in a place like that. I liked it. :)
| HeavensInferno 7/17/12 . chapter 2
It looks like you have a great start here. The phone bit was especially nice, I thought it was a creative twist on the girl-meets-boy plot.
Your writing seems jumbled at the moment, and the pacing seems a little rushed. I think with a little editing you'd catch some grammar mistakes, but they didn't distract from the story.
Keep it going! I love the name Verona, btw.