|Reviews for School|
| Small Wings Flying 7/13/12 . chapter 1
I like how you've structured this acoustic - normally I see random words that relate in some obscure way, but you've actually made it into a coherent sentence that still circulates over the 'school' as a whole.
I have to say though, as a tutor, that I don't particularly like the message you're portraying here. I've been to school (not too far off too, I'm only 19) and I know homework can sometimes seem cumbersome, but you will learn soon enough if you haven't already how important having that homework is, even if it has absolutely nothing to do with your curriculum, because it imparts discipline. The way you've said it just implies it's a waste that teachers pile you up with, and doesn't speak particularly well in my view about your approach to learning. I'll say, if you handed that in to me, I wouldn't be happy at all. :)
Ohana from the Review Marathon (link in profile)