|Reviews for The Sun|
| Small Wings Flying 7/13/12 . chapter 1
I like the image of the sun swimming because of how it ties two worlds together, ie. the sun in the sky and the water in the oceans below.
I also like your portrayal of the night as you've ignored the cliche of night being evil and showed one of it's good sides. It gets ignored far too often sadly enough, but you've showed nicely how important it is for the earth to cool down during the night, otherwise we'll turn to charcoal.
Ohana from the Review Marathon (link in profile)