|Reviews for Lonely|
| S.Anne.W 7/11/12 . chapter 1
I really like this. To be honest, I've gotten really sick of all of the zombie stories on here, but this one interests me and I actually really like it. Mostly because I think it's fairly original and the writing is good. The narrator's voice somehow suits the subject of the story and I also like the short sentences at the beginning. The only one that I would change would be the: 'you always assume the prior,/but never the latter'. I would put them both together on one line. Other than that I do kind of wish it was longer, but I don't really mind that it was short. Also, since this isn't marked as 'completed', I hope that you write some more in the near future.
Well done on this, I like to read some short and sweet (sometimes bitter-sweet in subject) stories, so I did enjoy this.
- .W :)
| Prinstimon 7/10/12 . chapter 1
As a fan of the zombie/apocalypse genre I really liked this. I felt quite connected to the gas station owner and the mood/theme was consistent.
This is probably one of my favorite pieces regarding zombies/apocalypse due to humor and its writing style.
I look forward to reading your future works :)
| freddyburn 7/10/12 . chapter 1
Interesting take on the whole zombie story line man. I like it