|Reviews for Passion and Nature|
| Guest 10/7/12 . chapter 1
I love that last line, I think that's really great. Emotions can be quite like the earth. Great poem.
| Natari Mirumura 7/18/12 . chapter 1
Amazing! I love the flow and power of this poem. Original, really. Keep it up :D
| Nahaylem 7/11/12 . chapter 1
Repetition is a powerful tool, don't overuse it. Also, this line "Burning strike" doesn't flow with the rest of the poem. Good title though.