|Reviews for Eden Guard|
| chibipoint5 2/10/13 . chapter 1
The intro sounds like Chrome Shelled Regios fan fic
| kingofe3 2/10/13 . chapter 12
Nice to see more of Reina's thoughts as well others.
| kingofe3 2/10/13 . chapter 11
Finally you updated the story! Thank you!
This chapter didn't have much, but the inclusion of a new character can always lend to more interesting development (and enemies). I'll get to the next chapter right away.
| JohnnyZwei 2/9/13 . chapter 11
THAT CHUBBY MAN IS THE FINAL BOSS!
Naw, just fooling around. But it is cool to finally see the next part of this story.
| Kisho 2/9/13 . chapter 13
Kyaaaa, this is so coooll, nya ;w; I cannot tell you how happy I am to see you back and writing again, nya TwT
Maybe I'm just crazy but the prose feels so much cleaner and smoother, the characters so much more clear-cut and defined, nya, I looove iiiittt ;v;
The plot is getting deep, too, but it's still so... so... easy to read, nya! That's amazingg TuT
And jeez, Sephi-chan, talk about a cliffhanger xDD Uuuu, I really can't wait to see more, nya, I hate to say this after such an amazing and long-awaited triple update, but... moooreee xDD (/hit)
| Jax Creation 10/21/12 . chapter 10
Eeeeeeh!? You're ending it there!? Noooooo (TT_TT) But it's right in the middle of the fight! *bangs head against desk*
Also, Break command awesome.
Great job Sephi-chan.
UPDATE SOON! (*_*)
*(Typo): As a result, it flew and [thrashed] about faster than the other one had.
| Jax Creation 10/21/12 . chapter 9
Uwaaah ! Elliot is so cool :3 He just promoted from the list of characters I want to punch in the face to being the dark, awesome, brooding guy XD
I felt that the Contaminoid could have lasted a little longer considering how "indestructible" you made them out to be n the last chapter, but meh.
Good work :3
| Jax Creation 10/21/12 . chapter 8
Oops... Completely forgot about the contaminoids XD
Well... Anyway. FIGHT! Yay!
| Jax Creation 10/21/12 . chapter 7
Poor, poor, Reina... (TT_TT) Sephi-chan don't make this too sad!
| Jax Creation 10/21/12 . chapter 6
Hmm... So the reality is, no Eden, then no survival outside of Eden. It has a pivotal role in this world... That's kind of sad...
Good chapter, nice character development.
*[Elliot alone is enough to deal with the formalities."] - Odd sentence structure here. I get what you mean but I think it's been worded incorrectly. Sounds more like Elliot is Alice's butler XD
| Jax Creation 10/20/12 . chapter 5
Aaaaaaaaaahh, Zenith you did the right thing lying to Reina (TT_TT) Must have killed him, but he was right, Reina would have probably done something stupid if she knew the truth...
And dammit why is Eve so adorable? She's like Chi from Cho it's, but a little more empty—probably more like Rei Ayanami from NGE. I know that the Resistance is out to get her though... Aaah, I don't anything to happen to her!
| Jax Creation 10/20/12 . chapter 4
(TT_TT) Was really able to visualise the scene with Zenith and Rei in my head with the melancholy music and everything...
This is really fantastic...
But so sad... Uwaaaah...
| Jax Creation 10/20/12 . chapter 3
Dun dun dun! Is he going to meet people he once knew? Aaaaah, poor Zenith, he's just being shoved right into the thick of things...
Alice is really very cold, isn't she? :/
And... Foreshadowing? Is he going to try and help Serith remember her past? Severe implications there...
Wooooo next chapter! Fight scene, yay! :3
| Jax Creation 10/20/12 . chapter 2
(O.O) He's a cyborg!? THAT'S SO COOL!
—Uh, I mean, poor Zenith, being made to work for the enemy. (TT_TT) And everyone thinks he's dead...
But wait, if he's a robot now, then what happened to his body? (O.o)?
Alice is... Intimidating to say in the least. Sounds like a genius, that one. One of the main antagonists I'm guessing?
Eve is a supercomputer? Should have seen that one coming. It's always the little girl! *eye twitch* Man, that means he died tring to save a stupid computer (-_-)...
Anyway, I love this concept XD Can tell it's gonna be awesome, way more awesome than my plans for Codename-Insignia! *ish a little bit jelly*
*[He remembered that he had seen the hooded figure from before to be Seris.] - I think you're missing a few words here. :S
| kingofe3 10/20/12 . chapter 10
Man, why did it have to stop there?! It was just getting good too! Anyway, great story! I have really enjoyed reading it and hope you continue it.