They haven't sucked no. But I do agree that chapter seventeen may have been the least bit unrealistic but that's ok. No one is going to do perfect. I'm actually really enjoying this story, I think you're doing a Wonderful job so stick with it! And keep up the great work.

I liked this because they're finally friends and they're getting real. I like that he understands her and her situation. Can't wait for the rewrite/update!

oh my gosh! I LOVE IT! At one point I was thinking, there was going to a quick kiss, almost like (if you watch Glee, if not I'm not going to try to convince you to watch it) Finn & Rachel in season one in the auditorium, and now in season 4 with Rachel & Brody. (Ok you get the picture.) I also love the Janis part. Also I'm a HUGE fan of the Doors, why not later on in the chapters have him play her a cover of 'Hello I Love You'? and then have a mash up of her doing something else? I just randomly came up with the idea, it's your story hon, so keep going at it the way you want.

Keep writing and updating, and I'll keep reading :)

I'm looking forward to reading the rewrite because the story is so compelling. I just have to know what happens next. They seem to get a little bit closer with every update.

OMG! This was soo good! You are such an amazing writer, and those are hard to find these days, sadly. I could not stop reading this and I never wanted to run out of chapters to read! Please please please update it soon! I will honestly love you forever.
I really love the relationship that she has with her sister and how everything that she does is for her. Also, at the begining I kind of felt like her relationship with joe was a bit forced but then it got into the later chapters and I could tell that she really cared for him and that he was an amazing friend to her.
Anyways, update soon!
Xoxox

Fantastic writing. Heartbreaking story. Everything should be third person to avoid confusion. Update soon!

I like it already. Good story (:

finally got to read the updates! I loved them :) it is really starting to get interesting now. (I also kinda see a love triangle going on.)

I'm glad that he didn't reveal her name. I wonder what will happen next. The sleazy guy knows where Kaily lives. So much drama, but I really enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading more!

I LOVE IT! I can't wait to read more :) Please update soon! xoxo, Chelly

HAHAHAH "his ball-choking skinny jeans"! Best quote ever! I loved it lolol

Hi there! I'm soo sorry for taking so long to read this. I've been super busy with work and school :( but I remembered that I really wanted to read your story and I'm soo glad I did. It's amaaaazing so far! I absolutely LOVE it :D I love the storyline and the characters - everything about it! You're doing an amazing job with it and I can't wait to read more :) Keep on writing! xoxo, Chelly

Love the story! Update soon! :D

Wow. the dad wasn't intimadating at all o.o Kinda harsh,but hey it gives him props for the position on the school board.
Excellent job in writing this :) I can not wait for more :))

LOVED IT! :DD Please write more!