|Reviews for Where The Lines Overlap|
| Black hawk1234 9/29/12 . chapter 18
They haven't sucked no. But I do agree that chapter seventeen may have been the least bit unrealistic but that's ok. No one is going to do perfect. I'm actually really enjoying this story, I think you're doing a Wonderful job so stick with it! And keep up the great work.
| writersdream72 9/28/12 . chapter 18
I liked this because they're finally friends and they're getting real. I like that he understands her and her situation. Can't wait for the rewrite/update!
| missingheath7908xcasey8107 9/27/12 . chapter 16
oh my gosh! I LOVE IT! At one point I was thinking, there was going to a quick kiss, almost like (if you watch Glee, if not I'm not going to try to convince you to watch it) Finn & Rachel in season one in the auditorium, and now in season 4 with Rachel & Brody. (Ok you get the picture.) I also love the Janis part. Also I'm a HUGE fan of the Doors, why not later on in the chapters have him play her a cover of 'Hello I Love You'? and then have a mash up of her doing something else? I just randomly came up with the idea, it's your story hon, so keep going at it the way you want.
Keep writing and updating, and I'll keep reading :)
| writersdream72 9/26/12 . chapter 16
I'm looking forward to reading the rewrite because the story is so compelling. I just have to know what happens next. They seem to get a little bit closer with every update.
| The Dancing Ginger 711 9/25/12 . chapter 14
OMG! This was soo good! You are such an amazing writer, and those are hard to find these days, sadly. I could not stop reading this and I never wanted to run out of chapters to read! Please please please update it soon! I will honestly love you forever.
I really love the relationship that she has with her sister and how everything that she does is for her. Also, at the begining I kind of felt like her relationship with joe was a bit forced but then it got into the later chapters and I could tell that she really cared for him and that he was an amazing friend to her.
Anyways, update soon!
| writersdream72 9/25/12 . chapter 14
Fantastic writing. Heartbreaking story. Everything should be third person to avoid confusion. Update soon!
| luvnstuff 9/25/12 . chapter 1
I like it already. Good story (:
| missingheath7908xcasey8107 9/25/12 . chapter 12
finally got to read the updates! I loved them :) it is really starting to get interesting now. (I also kinda see a love triangle going on.)
| writersdream72 9/24/12 . chapter 12
I'm glad that he didn't reveal her name. I wonder what will happen next. The sleazy guy knows where Kaily lives. So much drama, but I really enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading more!
| ChellyWrites 9/23/12 . chapter 10
I LOVE IT! I can't wait to read more :) Please update soon! xoxo, Chelly
| ChellyWrites 9/23/12 . chapter 4
HAHAHAH "his ball-choking skinny jeans"! Best quote ever! I loved it lolol
| ChellyWrites 9/23/12 . chapter 3
Hi there! I'm soo sorry for taking so long to read this. I've been super busy with work and school :( but I remembered that I really wanted to read your story and I'm soo glad I did. It's amaaaazing so far! I absolutely LOVE it :D I love the storyline and the characters - everything about it! You're doing an amazing job with it and I can't wait to read more :) Keep on writing! xoxo, Chelly
| LivingTheJGurlDream1728 8/25/12 . chapter 4
Love the story! Update soon! :D
| T.Siarel 8/25/12 . chapter 6
Wow. the dad wasn't intimadating at all o.o Kinda harsh,but hey it gives him props for the position on the school board.
Excellent job in writing this :) I can not wait for more :))
| T.Siarel 8/25/12 . chapter 5
LOVED IT! :DD Please write more!