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| Reviews for When You Were Mine |
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   Rimillim 3/20/13 . chapter 2Kyaaaa, I'm getting all hyped up already! () |
| Fairyfantasy 1/1/13 . chapter 20 hey yours is the second fiction i have read. and found it great seriously i love the way you portray your characters and the story is very interesting I'm really looking forward for this so pls try to update soon so that i can read further. |
| Fairyfantasy 1/1/13 . chapter 20 hey yours is the second fiction that I'm reviewing and its great i love the way you have portrayed your characters and this chapter was great hope that you update soon because I'm just impatient to read further. |
| Alaeryel 12/17/12 . chapter 9 WOW-she doesn't have much happiness in her life and has conformed herself to it! My heart BREAKS for her and Lily just doesn't understand why and what she has been through. It will be INTERESTING to see how this story will turn out and if she will get her chance at happiness and love! |
| patricia 10/6/12 . chapter 10 Please Update Soon. Your stories make me smile |
| guest 10/3/12 . chapter 10 please update soon. your stories make me smile |
| Alaeryel 9/8/12 . chapter 7 WOW! Atleast one question was raised in my mind-is there going to be some rivalry now between the sisters over Liam-Violet won't admit it but I think she is softening with Liam in a sense but not outwardly yet. This is such an INTRIGUING STORY and I will be eagerly awaiting more! |
| Alaeryel 9/8/12 . chapter 6 OMG THIS CHAPTER WAS BEAUTIFUL and it REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART when Lilly came off the bus and was ACTUALLY EXCITED to see her sister! It will be interesting to see how this story plays out and how their uncle will treat Lilly. AGAIN IT WAS BEAUTIFUL, POIGNANT AND POETIC FOR ME-YOU ARE AMAZING! |
| Alaeryel 9/8/12 . chapter 5 AH such a HARD HEADED young girl BUT also one who has been hurt badly in the past-been there and done that so I can SYMPATHIZE with Violet. Another BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER and SOOOOOO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY Girl! |
| Guest 9/5/12 . chapter 7 plz finish it i want to read it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
| Bubba98 8/30/12 . chapter 6 update plz! |
| Alaeryel 8/29/12 . chapter 4 Too many questions I need to find answers to-what happened to her? why is she with her Uncle? etc. will be watching for more. |
| GoCats27 8/11/12 . chapter 5 Really good and I like where this is going! You need to improve your grammar but the writing and characters are beautiful! |
| Edward George 7/22/12 . chapter 2 I know that feeling all too well. You are brilliant to write such a story as this, the feelings, deep thoughts; seeming to ask: Why? The emotion drew me in to the story as she searched for herself. Looking to get her self esteem back. Very well thought out. # # # |
| KaylaHeart 7/22/12 . chapter 3 Aww, I like it! |
