|Reviews for Fragments|
| Stonehartdreamer27 7/25/12 . chapter 1
This is so relatable. Can't even number how many times I've asked the same things. Good job.
| Men don't protect you anymore 7/18/12 . chapter 1
wow deep, good job! everyone feels like this at some time, good job expressing that!
| STE 7/14/12 . chapter 1
This is SwimmingThroughExistance...
This is, in my opinion your best work ever... yet(: great job, beautiful, it flowed just right and the rhyme scheme and rhthm was spot on, i also enjoyed the begeinning and ending lines... the fact that they were same added so much drama to the piece. but it was still very simple and clean. great job!
| True Talker 7/13/12 . chapter 1
I read this and I thought. Do you know that today I wrote a poem about the "mirror"? I find that interesting. I have written 5 poems in the last 3 or 4 days.