| Reviews for emotions |
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Ophelia Schmit 8/18/12 . chapter 6It seems like you do have depression. Why your dad would tell you to stop is my guess. And, I bet your'e not ugly. If I were a person at school, I wouldn't care if you were ugly or what or where you came from, I would still be your friend. Anyway, I bet you're beautiful. I think the same, though I know it's not true. If you need someone to cry/lean on, I'm your girl. :D -Hermie |
TonyL 7/15/12 . chapter 3Well, your grammar is no worse than mine. I have always been told and I agree with this; If you get your point across in a story; grammar is secondary. Well you got your point across. |