Another well done story. It was very captivating, and my heart was beating as fast as a rabbit's by the end.

I don't know if you have ever heard of "The Lovely Bones", but this has some similarities to the beginning of that book.

Anyway, nice job! Can't wait for your next story.

This was very vivid, and you did very well descriptionwise. Good job! I must ask though, what was the certain trait?