|Reviews for 1) Adventures of a Greenie|
| stephen 1/11/13 . chapter 24
Excellent story can't wait for part 2.
| Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 24
Great story, looking forward to Galaxy at war. Thanks
| ODDVAR OLAFSON 1/5/13 . chapter 23
Very good and very well written. You get better and better!
| deformed beauty 12/30/12 . chapter 24
I really liked the story and I love the characters. I'm happy you're going to continue it because the plot is awesome. I hope to read about when Roy gets to his school and his time there, and if there's going to be more mysterious plots there as well.
I just really hope that you get a Beta for this story because I like it, but it makes me allergic to all the typos and I try not to cringe everytime I see a sentence that need to be deconstructed and rebuilt.
Just keep up the good work and please get a Beta :D
| stephen 12/23/12 . chapter 24
A great storey. I hope you continue with Roy's adventures.
| Jose 12/16/12 . chapter 24
This was an interesting chapter, but disappointing at the same time. The story should have continued a few more chapters in order to cover his friends on Green Hell and what happened to them.
Anyway I still enjoyed it and I am looking forward to the next installment.
| bluemax65 12/15/12 . chapter 24
Really good story. A little (ok, just plain slow in the posting of the chapters). A couple of spelling mistakes and switched names.
All in all, a really good story.
Looking forward to the next story with Roy. Hopefully the chapters will be posted a lot faster.
| a99515 12/12/12 . chapter 24
A great story that got better and better as you refined it down. Keep up the great writeing VR you are going to go far with it.
| Pat 12/12/12 . chapter 24
What an intriguing story! Very imaginative characters, life forms and planets.
Thanks, I look forward to reading your 'Galaxy at War'.
| briva2 12/12/12 . chapter 24
Great story m8,
Can't wait for the next one!
Love reading your work,
All the best and happy holidays,
| Crystallea1321 12/11/12 . chapter 24
Oh. My. Gosh. That was a terrible cliffhanger, and by terrible I mean incredibly clever and effective. I hate it. Don't do this to me! I want moooore! I can't believe the rest of the Masters are still alive! I never suspected a thing. You clever, evil woman, you. Now, I have to wait for you to get out the next one and you have to finish Phil first, which is acceptable since it's Phil but I want more Partner too! I feel like crying because it's over and I can't find out what happens next! Please get out the new story soon, I wanna know what happens next! Pleeeaaase! (puppy dog eyes) Pwease?
| iboardnut 12/11/12 . chapter 24
I am hooked on your stories. Thanks!
| Guest 12/10/12 . chapter 23
LOVED IT !
| NeWBeE 12/8/12 . chapter 23
That was great! The combat was cool, just need a little more space combat described, lol. McElligott stepped into it this time not listening to Stahl. Roy's story is just as good as Erics' has been. I look forward to your next update VR!
| Crystallea1321 12/7/12 . chapter 23
Well, that was unexpected. Wow, plot twist. I did not suspect the president of it, but... you know it might make sense. Hmmm, and Partner, ah, the amazing Partner. So glad he came with friends. I like his friends. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really can't.