Excellent story can't wait for part 2.

Great story, looking forward to Galaxy at war. Thanks

Very good and very well written. You get better and better!

I really liked the story and I love the characters. I'm happy you're going to continue it because the plot is awesome. I hope to read about when Roy gets to his school and his time there, and if there's going to be more mysterious plots there as well.
I just really hope that you get a Beta for this story because I like it, but it makes me allergic to all the typos and I try not to cringe everytime I see a sentence that need to be deconstructed and rebuilt.
Just keep up the good work and please get a Beta :D

A great storey. I hope you continue with Roy's adventures.

This was an interesting chapter, but disappointing at the same time. The story should have continued a few more chapters in order to cover his friends on Green Hell and what happened to them.

Anyway I still enjoyed it and I am looking forward to the next installment.

Thanks, Jose

Really good story. A little (ok, just plain slow in the posting of the chapters). A couple of spelling mistakes and switched names.

All in all, a really good story.

Looking forward to the next story with Roy. Hopefully the chapters will be posted a lot faster.

A great story that got better and better as you refined it down. Keep up the great writeing VR you are going to go far with it.

What an intriguing story! Very imaginative characters, life forms and planets.

Thanks, I look forward to reading your 'Galaxy at War'.

Great story m8,
Can't wait for the next one!
Love reading your work,
All the best and happy holidays,
Thanks

Ham

Oh. My. Gosh. That was a terrible cliffhanger, and by terrible I mean incredibly clever and effective. I hate it. Don't do this to me! I want moooore! I can't believe the rest of the Masters are still alive! I never suspected a thing. You clever, evil woman, you. Now, I have to wait for you to get out the next one and you have to finish Phil first, which is acceptable since it's Phil but I want more Partner too! I feel like crying because it's over and I can't find out what happens next! Please get out the new story soon, I wanna know what happens next! Pleeeaaase! (puppy dog eyes) Pwease?

I am hooked on your stories. Thanks!

LOVED IT !

That was great! The combat was cool, just need a little more space combat described, lol. McElligott stepped into it this time not listening to Stahl. Roy's story is just as good as Erics' has been. I look forward to your next update VR!

Well, that was unexpected. Wow, plot twist. I did not suspect the president of it, but... you know it might make sense. Hmmm, and Partner, ah, the amazing Partner. So glad he came with friends. I like his friends. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really can't.