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| Reviews for Adventures of a Greenie |
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   soulwind2100 10/26/12 . chapter 18hey Vanessa, Great story :) the suspend though killing me... can't wait the next chapter :) keep the grat job :) regard soulwind2100 |
| Crystallea1321 9/30/12 . chapter 17 Awwww, Partner is sooo cute! I want a Hell Hound! And Phil is as clever as usual. Could should be clout dear, in that last long paragraph the one where Phil went on a monologue. Good as always, please update soon. |
| douglasc 9/29/12 . chapter 17 It gets better and better. |
| a99515 9/29/12 . chapter 17 osso so good better this time than last. keep it up V.R. |
| Crystallea1321 9/29/12 . chapter 16 Wahoo, more Phil and Partner! I love them, yay! Write more please. |
| Flubber 9/28/12 . chapter 16 Work on whatever inspires you at the time; I'll look forward to it. Thanks. |
| Zedd 9/27/12 . chapter 16 Anotar great chatear in a great story |
| briva2 9/27/12 . chapter 16 Blast m8, What an cliffhanger, now i can't wait for the next chapter! great work, thanks ham |
| a99515 9/26/12 . chapter 16 Oh good a new chapter, keep up the high standerd in your writing ! |
| NeWBeE 9/26/12 . chapter 16 Very nice update! I'm happy to see that the assassin got what he deserved from the "mistress" of the planet, lol. This is definitely worth a read just as much as Eric's story for what I've read so far. I look forward to your next update! |
| Kevin Etherton 8/26/12 . chapter 15 Excellent ,more please. |
| Crystallea1321 8/22/12 . chapter 15 Well, that was awesome. I thought she might be the planet, but I wasn't sure... I do love sentient planets, they're amazing. Oh, and you might want to check through the entire things for times when you right Eric instead of Roy, it happens every so often. Please write more soon, that was a terrible place to leave me at, I hate and kind of enjoy cliff hangers, but I only enjoy them when I create them! So you have to write more! |
| Crystallea1321 8/22/12 . chapter 13 You need to get rid of stuff at the end of this chapter I assume. I love Decker! |
| Crystallea1321 8/21/12 . chapter 7 This is really interesting, I love the plot line! Just please go over this again looking for extra words or words that repeat, it needs some editing and then it would be amazing! Now I have to keep reading! |
| a99515 8/20/12 . chapter 15 I like it . You have made it a great story by adding just a little to your old one. Keep it up VR. |
