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  Avid reader 9/12/12 . chapter 1 I love this story please continue. This story has enormous potential |
| Avid reader 8/30/12 . chapter 2 Please update I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story. It seems like its going to be lots to fun. Your writing is grea and it has me hooked. So pretty pleas update quick |
| Anon 8/19/12 . chapter 3 I really love this story. Please keep updating |
| grace87 7/24/12 . chapter 1 i hate to give criticizum, i'm not like that but i think you just named the old cliche teenager with Will, like within what he was wearing. Yes it shows his personality, but you're starting to change it slightly to this fun, average; maybe . i also think you confused his personality with this horrible person. yes, i understand that Say is supposed to get the wrong impression. but you could have done that in other ways. but, i still like it it reminds me of my favorite book pride and prejudice |
| Guest 7/20/12 . chapter 3 did you make this to sound like pride and prejudice? |
| prankster105 7/20/12 . chapter 3 luv it! |
| UMMLC 7/19/12 . chapter 3 Thank you and I can't wait for the next chapter. I really enjoyed this one and I like how this story is turning out. I wonder how Will will go doing the chores and hopefully he wont loose cause i want to see what Shay will be like as a girly girl :D Sincerely U MadeMyLifeComplete |
| UMMLC D 7/19/12 . chapter 2 I really like this story and I wonder what happened to Will in the garden also it would be cool if you did his perspective at some point :) Sincerely, U MadeMyLifeComplete |
| Guest 7/18/12 . chapter 2 I love this, continue! :) |
| Avid reader 7/18/12 . chapter 2 Loving this story, I love will already :) |
 Master.Skye 7/17/12 . chapter 2OMG ! You need to finish this I have never read a better one! |
