I thought that the vocabulary was nice and that it was well written, but it seems like the poem dragged and didn't make any sense at all. The first thing I thought of when I saw this was that you were using fancy wording to cover up for a mediocre poem with no direction...

Oh my god... that was so beautiful and sad. my eyes are brimming with tears. beautiful. beautiful, beautiful... please keep writing.

This poem is...beautiful. I can't really think of any other words besides beautiful and amazing. Fantastic job.

Please r&r me

fantasbulous! beautiful and perfect in every way! ^_^

SP

It was very beautiful and very magical. I really like it! It's so sad and sweet. I was a bit confused but that's only because I'm a loser with a very short vocabulary, hehe!

Wow. That was really brilliant. You have some real tallent. Do you have anymore? If so please put them on this website because if there as good as this poem than im all ears!

i liked it! really nicely worded
Henna

seemed a bit lengthy, disjointed,

stick to the point. this is how it made ME "feel".

if i got the wrong feeling....is that my fault?