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| ICU2 2004-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is funny, i like it |
| SpyTrap 2003-12-02 ch 1,  | abusePretty cool, and certainly unique. A very refreshing and interesting poem. The title captured me at once :) |
| TiEka Koniku 2003-11-29 ch 1, | abuseok so i lost.. how is this about love? ::is confused:: i mean it good... i just dont see how it love. *TI* |
| banana32 2001-09-15 ch 1, | abuseGood Work! *clap clap* I wish I could write good non-rhyming poetry like that. I am so jealous of your talent |
| DiRtY 2001-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery interesting, I can feel the "emotion" that the 2 ppl are expressing. "It happens never the way it is planned." I get the meaning of that, too well. |
| Paradoxical Goddess 2001-06-26 ch 1, | abusewow...i really liked this. excellent job |
| Riliss 2001-06-14 ch 1, | abuseYour poetry is very unique when held against the others i have read around here. This is the first of your work i've read, but i now intend to read the rest. "Now we struggle for the gun; Grim, like stray dogs" captures the moment in a way i would never have thought of. Its a wonderful extended metaphor in my mind. |