|Reviews for Fiction Savvy|
| poisedtokill 9/9/12 . chapter 3
Nice! Really clever voice. Looking forward to more.
| Guest 9/8/12 . chapter 1
I like the noirish-ness, but, like you mentioned, it WAS over-the-top. I mean...Detective Guy, Miss Lovely...all sorts of metaphores. It's totally cliche. Obviously you meant it that way, although I'm hoping it was meant to be humerous rather than a "I dunno how to write noir, so I'l just be cliche" thing. I also gotta add, 90% of it was dialog, so it was a little slooooww with all the yammering.
...not that it was bad or anything. Well written.