It was creepy. Really creepy. But *shrugs* it was nice. You have a couple of spelling errors though, nothing major

You. Are. Gonna. Give. Me. Nightmares. However, the story was awesome, albeit a bit creepy... Yes, (makes up mind) I like it. A lot. Awesomely creepily awesome.

I read this last night on my cellphone and it gave me a hard type sleeping, to be honest. The way it made me somewhat curious and frightful, as well as the fact that it made me think maybe far too hard. The last part was probably what got most of me, really.