When you write dialogue, start a new paragraph when each new person speaks. Just a little tip. :D

Glad he made the cut! It was a little quick, but not bad :) Keep writing, and don't forget descriptions! Love it!

I liked it! You write very well and descriptively!

I wish there could have been more details: like what Jules did to avoid his bullies? Also, where does this take place?

Jules seems like a sweet character with a lot of potential. I am still excited to see where this goes.

MW

Wow, this story is awesome. Cant wait till the next part comes out! :)

Wish it was longer! I love stories about joining the circus! Update!
MW

Good start but if you want more reviews than this one, youre going to have to update