|Reviews for Circus Freaks|
| MagicWords 7/18/12 . chapter 3
When you write dialogue, start a new paragraph when each new person speaks. Just a little tip. :D
Glad he made the cut! It was a little quick, but not bad :) Keep writing, and don't forget descriptions! Love it!
| MagicWords 7/17/12 . chapter 2
I liked it! You write very well and descriptively!
I wish there could have been more details: like what Jules did to avoid his bullies? Also, where does this take place?
Jules seems like a sweet character with a lot of potential. I am still excited to see where this goes.
| SummerMoon 7/17/12 . chapter 2
Wow, this story is awesome. Cant wait till the next part comes out! :)
| MagicWords 7/16/12 . chapter 1
Wish it was longer! I love stories about joining the circus! Update!
| randomdancer64 7/16/12 . chapter 1
Good start but if you want more reviews than this one, youre going to have to update