I loved the ending of this chaPter. It gives us hope that maybe he can save her

I love how fast paced your story is... and omg so much betrayal and scariness D:

OOOOOOW I feel like a certain awaited character from my part is going to pop up soon ! :'3
And I like the travelling trio, as well as Rojiru
So good so far !

Awesome, action-filled chapter ! :'D

I have a feeling that I will like Shouta later, he's got a nice half-good personality :D

My my, look at these revelations. Oddly enough, I find it sad for what happened to Shouta's family and the village. Curse you Feudal Lord! Update soon please

Lol Chikoshi got owned...although with Sakurai's ability any one would have been caught of guard. I also now starting to feel sorry for Sakurai. Having to do something he doesn't want to. SHouta is still a in my eyes. Good Job chikoshi, telling Kasumi what is happening.

Woot! Sakurai in the hizzous. And now Shouta is being a dick and who is this Chikoshi person? Ninja? Spy?

Sorry I haven't reviewed, I've been away for a bit. Great chapter. Not really sure what to think of The Feudal Lord's scheming and Shouta, but we'll see won't we.

I actually really like this story. It's got a real adventure theme to it thats really enjoyable, and its not as romance based as many stories nowadays. I can't wait to see when you use my character but otherwise your writing is amazing. Thank you for sharing.

LadyKnight. :)

Wow Shouta is just one unlucky dude, nothing seems to go his way

So Sakurai and Chikoshi care for Kasumi? I wonder how things will develop, since they work for the feudal lord... my favorite part was when Kasumi slapped Shouta xD epic !
I'm looking forward to the update ! :D

So...I have to PM you around 10 tonight seeing as I'm new to this site. Can you wait until then or so?

Glad to see that your back! I'd like to submit a character if you still have any places open

Nice chapter.