|Reviews for Forbidden|
| Queen in the North 9/29/12 . chapter 1
that last haiku got me :) beautiful
| Manauwer Raza 9/5/12 . chapter 1
'm sort of liking your words...
| SW 8/11/12 . chapter 1
WOW. I can't write haikus. P: they all suck. But these are amazing! :D beautiful! Meh love!
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| Wishingonastar 8/6/12 . chapter 1
really good, i liked the last haiku, keep writing poetry i can see you improving
| Emmeline Alicia Mary 7/31/12 . chapter 1
| thetabbykitteh 7/30/12 . chapter 1
Wow I really loved this especially the first three lines. This flowed very nicely. Great work.
| PolarPony 7/28/12 . chapter 1
Very short and sweet, which is why I like haikus :) I really liked the third verse, it has a nice tone to it.
| Sami Dial 7/27/12 . chapter 1
lol reminds me of a time lol
wonderful all the same :P
| Stonehartdreamer 7/27/12 . chapter 1
| Basara 7/26/12 . chapter 1
what if all these three to be bound in one? well, that'd be more difficult than usual.
| Men don't protect you anymore 7/24/12 . chapter 1
this is great actually! i have deffinitely felt the same way, so it evokes that memory and emotion from me. good job! keep it up!
| Abbytjie 7/23/12 . chapter 1
I love this. *faved*
The haiku flow together, I don't think you need the ellipses, separating them into paragraphs is enough. You represent the idea so beautifully, I am stunned. I honestly have nothing more to say, except saying once again how amazing this is.
| MagicWords 7/22/12 . chapter 1
Wow I loved this! It was so alive and moving! The last three lines really were fantastic! Good job!
| Purplemonkey123 7/21/12 . chapter 1
loved it beautifully written!
| Natari Mirumura 7/18/12 . chapter 1
Wow. Amazing! The last three lines in specific are wonderful. Amazing job with this, keep it up :D