|Reviews for The Mage and The Gate Portal|
| CrackMeOpen 8/6/12 . chapter 2
OMG Professor Rackham reminds me of my own professor... T-T he never gives me a pass even if I have a broken ankle.
I feel so bad for James, to be publicly humiliated like that.
The chapter isn't boring (reference to AN on bottom) just be sure to use spell check and (grammar check). In some places your speech was a little off, otherwise, great job! I am looking forward to the next chapter!