Wow, that was really good. You could sense the confusion in the conflicting words. I loved it.

Wow, sounds pretty conflicted. Sounds like some emotional issues, but I love it all the same. Great job.

Beautiful.I love the strong expressions of this poem. The confusion and pain was expressed in such a lovely manner, it's astonishing. Such pain and let out with such passion like this, is amazing. Keep it up :D