i love this! oh my gosh, have you ever read something that seemed to literally transport your brain into another place? that's what i felt when i read this. im a huge old west fan.
i like the way you ended the poem with the same words you started with. i love it when people do that. it really is like the icing on the cake! plus it's just a great way to close it. it's like you start with a basic statement and as you expand and articulate it to the fullest point, you close it with the same begining thought. great job!
-steph135

As I said before, this is really good. Especially since I know how much you love this kind of stuff, I think it's great that you put in a poem. Keep it up, and sorry for the late review.

haha dooooooode thats AWESOME! i'm soo proud of you! lol i loved it! seriously! the only thing i'd change is where you say
"Killed my own men
Is why they want my head"
you might have considered putting "that's why" instead of "Is" but still i seriously love it! and its a refreshing change to the other poems i've read, not to mention a sign of your growth and brantching out! GREAT JOB! keep it up!