Sad yet sweet.

I thought that this was very effective with what it was saying. Each line seemed to hold it's own aspect and add something further. There was just one thing though that to me, didn't seem to work. It's where Jesus is put as an 'imaginary saviour'. Now i'm not commenting on religion here, but to me that was saying that the person is depending somewhat on Jesus, but they don't believe he's real. It was a bit contradictory. I thought there was great hope and living for the future in the last line, it really ended it in a positive way instead of despairing. This was a powerful poem.