|Reviews for Clouds|
| C.J. Black 7/22/12 . chapter 1
Haha, :) that's a nice poem. but I cant help think of basic science... I would be a cat, -nothing to do but eat and sleep. sounds like the high life to me...!
| blackabyss1 7/19/12 . chapter 1
This poem was easy to understand, I like it. Just one mistake you made was 'there' instead of 'their'. But keep it up.
| my.life.is.over 7/19/12 . chapter 1
| Mayu Sun 7/19/12 . chapter 1
Nice, I can relate to the feeling.
| Rogue Energizer Bunny 7/19/12 . chapter 1
Interesting. I really like how you keep the topic of the clouds the whole time, instead of using it as a hook/jumping-off point and then abandoning it. Nice job.
AND I'M WORKING ON IT. D: