|Reviews for Fallen Angels|
| Purplemonkey123 7/20/12 . chapter 1
| Loraine Wentworth 7/19/12 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. It flows very nicely and has some interesting imagery.
A few pointers:
They just sit and wait [to] die
Held by the Earth's ashen feet [I really like this beautiful line]
And pray the sins are now forgave [incorrect grammar? Forgiven? Forgive? I'm not certain though, I could be wrong here]
| monkeyCsaw 7/19/12 . chapter 1
I particularly enjoyed this poem for a few reasons, and a few more I cannot quite put my finger on.
It flowed so beautifully and you can feel the melancholy through the words. Angels are a grand topic to write about, and fallen angels are sorrowful. You capture this perfectly and your diction is clear and concise. I especially enjoy the comparison of broken hearts and fallen angels.
"Earth's ashen feet" is my favorite, I must say. I have never read an author who describes Earth in that way and it was so fresh and original, I instantly fell in love with it.
You are a fantastic author, and I hope you continue writing!
| Laila14 7/19/12 . chapter 1
What I really loved was your choice of words. It really set a mood for the poem, in my opinion. The melody was very good, like it flowed nicely. I also think your beginning was very strong. It caught me. Amazing job! Keep up the great work!