| Reviews for Loss |
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K. Elisabeth 7/19/12 . chapter 1Love this. Really love it. It's especially pertinent to something I'm going through in my life right now. The idea of not having loss, because you have nothing at all... to identify loss as a thing, a tangible piece of you, and that you are so empty and so torn and so vacant, that you haven't loss, you don't have anything at all... breathtaking and painful. I love the thought, the idea, and the way you described it. Well done. |
StarrySky 7/19/12 . chapter 1 I know the feeling. Numb is the only word to describe it. Great poem. |
ayuke 7/19/12 . chapter 1This is so raw and powerful in the way that the speaker's emotion is masked by the amount of pain that they are feeling (to the extent that they feel numb!) Great job.. I'm sure every one of us can relate to this poem at one point in our lives.. -Ayu |