| Reviews for Haikus |
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Abbytjie 7/23/12 . chapter 1The first line of the first haiku doesn't fit in with the rest of it. I think in haiku V you meant stars instead of starts, remember to always triple check your work. My favourite one was definitely VI, I love the connection you make to love making the world go round and people getting dizzy when they're in love. All these haiku are really beautiful; they flow beautifully and are lovely to read. |
Laila14 7/20/12 . chapter 1Wow! These were all amazing (: I love your choice of wording! Beautifully written |